Rule 3: A Chorus Shouldn’t Be An Anti-climax
The third important rule seems simple but, unfortunatly,
is not. Just like the second rule we discussed above, we will discover
it's again a matter of walking on the edge. You will have to carefully
find your way between what's good and what is bad, and there isn't a clear
path to follow. But again, experience is something you can't buy but which
comes free with endurance and perseverance. So just don't give up when
it's getting tough; your peaks will get higher and your downs won't be
as low as they used to be!
So a chorus shouldn't be an anti-climax. Clear!
But why is this rule not as simple as it seems? I will try to explain this.
If you follow the first two rules you won't too quickly end up with a chorus
that's an anti-climax, just because these two rules ensure your chorus
will be more or less the heart of the song. But still your chorus can become
an anti-climax, simply because another part of the song attrackts too much
the attention. A very impressive instrumental break can easily put the
chorus in the shadows.
So if your chorus is an anti-climax depends not
only on the chorus itself, but on the rest of the song too. To avoid this
disturbing effect, you will have to be very careful where to put that instrumental
break, charismatic leadvocal-line etc.
To make things even more complicated, you will
have to watch out for the chorus to become the climax of the song itself!
This can be disasterous to your song, because you will end up with a song
which repeats it's climax over and over again, with the result that you
end up with a song that doesn't seem to have a climax at all! So every
time you write a song you will have to deal with the problem to write a
strong, catchy chorus but on the other hand not to make it too strong....
This virtual contradictionary is hard to solve,
just listen to daily radio. But there are some ways to help you with this:
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Distinction
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To avoid the chorus and the climax of the song to
interfere with each other, you can try to make a very clear distinction
between these two rivals. You can do so by putting them apart from each
other "physically" (give each of them their own space in the song), or
by making them sound as different as the song allows you to.
The clearer the difference, the less chance of
interference.
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If you can't beat them...
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Another aproach is to put the climax in the chorus
itself. This works best when done in the final chorus. This solution requires
you to change that chorus, otherwise it won't work, as we discussed earlier
in this lesson. These changes can range from just changing the key, adding
additional instruments (like backing-vocals) to even changing the lead-vocal
line. When done right you will end up with a super-chorus, which won't
be forgotten easily!
Some Examples
To give you some examples of the things I told you
in this lesson I have added four soundfiles to this lesson, which can BE
listened to just by clicking on the links. The files are all recorded in
the AU-format (PCM 8 bits 8kHz Mono).
I will briefly discuss each example and will
try to show you how the above is implemented into the examples. I also
will point at some tricks I used in these choruses. Don't forget there
are numerous examples to come up with, each with different combinations
and interpretations of the rules we discussed in this lesson. Just consider
these soundfiles as my contribution to what this is all about: music and
the fun of it!
The first example is the chorus of Alien
Tune, taken from the live-recorded third cassette of The Stag, Reset. Lesson
6 included the intro of this spacy song so maybe it's not a complete new-one
for some of you.
This version of the chorus is played at the end
of the song, and to make it stand out to the other choruses just because
it's the last one, the third line is added to it, which is actually a repetition
of the first line. The original chorus has only three lines, this final
one has four.
Another trick I used in this chorus is as simple
as efficiënt to draw the attention a chorus needs. I used an effects-processor
to distort the lead-vocals. Keeping the original lead-vocaltrack and putting
the distorted vocals behind it creates a very dramatic effect. A band like
ZZ-Top used a trick like this in their song Manic Mechanic.
The next example is also taken from Reset,
and is more melodic than the previous example. This will make it a lot
easier to remember this chorus as you will probably notice, but this of
course is also due to the fact that parts of the lyrics are repeated a
few times.
Another trick used in this chorus to make it
the eye-catcher of this song are the backing-vocals, which answer the questions
"asked" by the lead-singer. Using several backing-vocals and making them
"fade out" into the lead-vocals enhances the choir-effect. Recorded in
a real studio in stead of the rehearsal-room this can sound real impressive.
Please note the sound-sample starts with the
last line of the verse, which features a break to focus the attention to
the chorus even more.
Another track taken from Reset, so recorded
live at the rehearsal-room of The Stag, is the chorus of The Widow's Game.
This chorus is an example of a miniature of the entire song. It contains
parts of the main riff of the song, but the lead-vocals switch to a melodic,
strong line, while they stick more to the rhythm of the song during the
verses.
The final example of this lesson features
the first track of The Last Season, the first cassette of The Stag. This
chorus is short and melodic, yet it sounds simple. A chorus like this is
hard to forget, whether you like it or not.
In this particular case, the trick I used to
make the chorus stand out to the rest of the song is the addition of backing-vocals
(again) and a more prominent role for the keyboards in comparison to the
verses. Changes like this are great to draw the attention to the chorus.
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